All Comments on 'Ghulamen'

You had me at knowing the word ‘ghulam.’ Looking forward to more.

Also, what are the lemons, specifically?

I agree with a previous comment; using the word ghulamen is what drew me in. Came for the historical reference and amazons; stayed for the interesting world building and character set ups.

You have a great flow with the pacing and explaining the concepts.

Great stuff, hope to see more!!

Worth reading; very well done.

Not sure how to reply specifically to a comment, but @dttoma927 asking what the lemons are....

...hopefully you will soon find out in the next couple sections ;)

Yeah, @username is the only way, unfortunately.

You do a good job of world-building and setting up the characters. I had to reread certain sections to grasp concepts, but overall I enjoyed the chapter.

I'll patiently want for the next part.

This is an excellent series so far .... to the end of the 3rd part and look forward to the next installments