All Comments on 'Gift of Another for my Valentine'

A well crafted story. You took the time and the effort to compose a story and then to polish with technical skill.

The premise of trust and communication that fuels their passion is refreshing and spot on. And yet you still allow her lovers insecurities to express themsrlves. The no kissing rule the maintains his illusion of control. He still is unable to commit to her total enjoyment, he seeks to tame her with his "gift" by tying restrictions upon it.

Bittersweet. Loved the language and very erotic. Very deep, well written and beautiful short story.

You're writing is compelling and highly literary. Some of the best on Lit. Would love to know more about the two lovers, perhaps a backstory at some point?