All Comments on 'Gift of the Nymphs'

Really good, satisfying read

It was great, right up until the end when you had one sentence that took 36 lines to finish. That was rather disconcerting, and ruined the end of the story for me.

Good first story but to me you need to work on your paragraph structure and a smoother flow...Good luck.

That was just excellent. Not my usual kind of story, but it really worked. You captured the mythical feel but kept it grounded in the real world. A bit Gaiman-esque.

Looks like you're new here. I hope you keep it up, that's a stellar debut.

Great story, wonderfully inventive plot line.