All Comments on 'Gifted Ch. 03'

I eagerly await a new chapter!

At least you lost the Tony Roma/Zeus thing... Nicely done, keep developing the character and let's see where the relationship with the nurse leads. Keep up the good work.

Awesome! Keep up the good work!..crital

Okay, not really.

But I am looking forward to the next chapter.

very nice story so far. keep up the good work. try to develop his powers a little

I know you did it was only a three parter, I'd love to see where you could take this.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm dying for the next chapter!

You are a gifted writer, this is a great story. Please keep up the great work. Maybe make the chapters a bit longer. It definitely wasn't the story I was expecting. I loved it. Thanks

Keep writing.

certain parts do show promise, but certain other parts show major amateur traits. Chapter 1 was OK. But 2&3, not so much. I think I am gonna stop reading here. And don't bother cussing me off for my comment because I'm not gonna come back and read it.

I AM NOT A CRITIC . I LIKE THE STORY. I AM TIRED OF THOSE WITH OUT TALLENT OR COURAGE TO DO. BEING CRITICAL THOSE WHO ARE NOT

Love the story. Seems like there's a lot in store for us. Thanks! And keep up the good work!

A few years UNFINISHED stop now.

Don't bother