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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Pathos, empathy

This is one of the best stories I've read here. Please don't leave it as an unrequited love story. As Gina admitted to herself that she would pursue Yvonne if she was single, YES, YES, YES. It's noble for her not to want to hurt Pete, but I doubt he would stand in the way of her true happiness.

JustplainjeffJustplainjeffalmost 4 years ago

This definitely needs another chapter, ir two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

MOREEEEE

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Posting a first story on a whim and to scratch a one-time-only-itch born of social isolation. But I am delving into a follow up. Maybe more beyond that, who knows. Comments and feedback are welcome - I wish I could write a more dynamic story, more compelling and interesting di...