All Comments on 'Gina the Loving Naive Wife Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Wow!!

That was sooooo disgusting

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
beulahthebrit

Great story, hope there is a lot more of Gina and Alex to cum. What a very lucky woman she is, I would personally love to experience a gang-bang, but sadly lack the courage, as being a teacher it would be professional suicide if it became public. 10 stars.

KalimaxosKalimaxosabout 4 years ago
She pulls a train to help him?

The story is so laughable. Help a man with depression with the wife pulling a train in front of him! Its more likely he will eat a gun and end it all.

TurboT81TurboT81about 4 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the comments

Thanks for the comments, all i'll say is this is just a bit of fun for me. Non of my stories are based on real life events.

robroy93robroy93about 4 years ago
Cure

If that's a cute for depression, just hand me a loaded gun.

muncher354muncher354about 4 years ago
Too many numbers

You are too basic in your descriptions. Need to describe how the gangbang is going instead of just basic dick in ass stuff. Also way too focused on heights and cock lengths. Just explain if they are tall or not.

Greyheaded1Greyheaded1about 4 years ago
Bashing your thumb with a hammer is a cure for a headache

Not really and pulling a train won’t cure depression. 2 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
BIGGUS DICKUS!

Why is it that these stories always feature men with dicks that are, at a minimum, in the top 1 percentile by size. What are the odds all these guys would have giant cocks? LOL

TurboT81TurboT81about 4 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks for the constructive feedback, I don't mind if you don't like the story but comments that are verbally abusive to me directly will be deleted.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
WOW ! Now that was

one of the most stupid and infantile piece of drivel in LIT !

pendragon55pendragon55about 4 years ago
Enjoyed Together

Thanks for writing this story. My wife and I both enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Yeah it was pretty lame

Using the plot of a ditzy chick thinking that pulling a train is going to cure depression is asking for negative comments. Especially during this Time when depression and suxicideis rising. You know this.

Finish this and try another story.

Regards

C

26thNC26thNCalmost 3 years ago

It’s hard not to be abusive to someone who would write this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

now I'm retarded.... THANKS

upyoursixupyoursixover 1 year ago

You need to edit this. The names and ages are so confusing at the start!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

It's fantasy. Good fun and def 5 a star story.

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