All Comments on 'Girl Of Her Dreams'

Great start - hope to see more from you.

Therefore probably lousy in bed

Luscious description. Wish it were longer.

Absolutely wonderful. Am looking forward to more.

What a beautifully told story. Please write MORE

Best, JuLee

I loved this, please write some more

I'm a straight man, partial to Asian women. Clicked on asiantits328 because of the name. Found one bi story. I read it. Loved everything about it (I'm no literary analyzer). Found really good English with none of the common spelling and grammatical atrocities. Congratulations on your skill and talent. Keep writing.