All Comments on 'Girl Talk'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
none

you need more detail that was nothing didnt even get me off

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
wheres the story

there are no details, the truth or dare could have much longer. The brother & sister chapter needed details, details..... the end could have been better & more detailed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Quickie one

I agree that the story could have been better written, but I disagree with the lack of details. This is supposed to be a quick, short story and it's great at that.

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