by CrazyDaveTrucker60
I love your stories and this is no exception but it was too short.
Just love your stories. I found you just at the right time to keep me laughing.
My youngest is in hospital quite ill. My wife asked what ate u smiling and laughing about. I showed her, she is having a laugh too at your over the top stories.
Thank you.
Huh? So he fucks his "lesbian" sister Jean on and off a couple times, but then his sister Sherry (a 2nd one?) comes around and he'd like totally do her, but sisters are off limits? Doesn't really make much sense to those not inebriated enough... The story name is a premise not fulfilled, the pacing was off, stylization was a mess, and I am not a fan of the quick and dirty (I prefer stories with some romance). I kinda guessed the punch line right as the documents came up and it could have made a great story with some character exposition and better stylization, but I guess the aim here was for some quick fun.
I'd rate this as a 2* - 2.5* based on my tastes, but seeing that other readers find this for what it's meant to be, I won't score to avoid dragging the rating down