by writemarksmith
Good set up, got interesting with the lapdance, but it ended way to quickly.
More like this please! Don't rush through the sex though, you could've made it great. But more stories where a guy like this watches his girlfriend turn into a slut PLEASE!
Great story. The build up to the her ultimate betrayal was very well described.
Agree with a previous comment though that when she fully submits that should be drawn out as well. Hope to read more of Hana soon.
It would have been better and real if once they took his slut girlfriend into the back room each one took a turn on her. Standing and looking at him before walking back and sticking their dick in her. They walkout talking about how easy and full she is completely disregarding him calling her a just another asian slut for white men.
Fun story, well executed. Like others here, I wanted to see Hana take on everyone there - except her loser boyfriend. He needed to watch while Hana revealed herself as an insatiable slut. I couldn't help but wonder if Hana would ask to attend another soccer viewing match. Maybe next time she'll screw everybody there.
Where is the problem? He gives her a kick in the ass and looks for someone else. Girls are a dime a dozen and most of them are loyal and not cheating whores!