by writemarksmith
Fait accompli. The deed is done. Mark is doing alright although Steve owns his girl. Mark's making a few bucks and should start training another slut.
His instruction that she always be naked in his apartment in future! Phew! Smokin' hot! Too many treats in here! Now back to the next instalment...
I was not too keen how the relationship started with Craiglist, but now, wow! I love the way the story is developing - making him rich and dominant is a great touch - having him tell the sub what to do is hot - especially now he's said he doesn't want her having sex. I can't wait to turn the page....Good job!
Steve is giving directions to Val and Mark. If I'm Mark when I spread Vals bottom open her face would be in my crotch hoping my zipper is down. Mark should try and stay involved sexually grab a tit or rub her bottom. Steve will protest.I think this spins out of Marks control and he is left at home. A woman's process of selecting a lover is in question for me here.
OH ! Good story
I wish I could get my girlfriend to cuckold me like this. The furthest I ever got her to do was show her tits to my buddies one night when we were out drinking.
I love this story so much! I was so excited to see this updated! I especially loved the ass spreading! The way Val looked at him and wanted him to spread her ass for Steve! And those last rules Steve gave about her were so nice addition! I would love to see them do anal too, but it's completely up to you. :)
Slamming others for daring to have a different opinion is a far better definition of "hater."
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You have your opinion on the story? Fine. Others have their opinions on the story? Despite what you seem to think, also fine.
...the haters who secretly love it. Keep up the good stuff.
"GIRLFRIENDS" CANNOT cuckold anyone!!!!!!!
The ONLY person that can 'cuckold' someone is a Lieing, Cheating, Adulterous wife, and she can ONLY cuckold her poor damn fool HUSBAND!!!!!!!