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"We will see who is the adult when I beat you tonight again."
"Again? What are you talking about? Hemlock won the last two races."
"Won?"
"Well, you know what I mean! She finished second."
"Yeah... I know... I know what you mean... Stupid strong Moonlight."
"Strong is kind of an understatement."
"... I know... and... talking about the wolf... Here she comes..."
And the crowd roared.
A ponygirl wearing a fiery red catsuit, the color of the Tiantang Zhi Ma stable, a basic racing harness...
... and a very special bridle, made of ancient leather and completely ornate in pure gold.
When she entered the track, she was shining as if the sun had designated her as a single target for its light.
The race was over before it even started.
Xiuying guided her legendary ponygirl toward Sophie and Brittany.
"Hey, guys."
"Hey."
"Hey."
"Do you know what Moonlight just told me? She wants to retire! Please, tell her it makes no sense."
"Retire? Well, no. That would be a GREAT idea. Right, Brittany?"
"For once, I'm in total agreement with crab face. Moonlight should retire."
"HEEEY! You are not helping! You have to tell her to abandon that idea!"
"Nope... still a great idea."
"I concur..."
"Raaah! Fine! I'll wait for you two at the finish line, then!"
"Someone is cranky."
"I concur..."
The racetrack was always an entertaining place to be.
One by one, the ponies and their respective drivers were called to their gate.
After a short moment, the magic numbers were heard throughout the stadium...
Three...
Two...
One...
SLAM!
The gates sprung open, all the ponies rushed forward, willing to give all they got to achieve victory.
It was the thrill of the race.
... And as usual...
Moonlight was already two lengths ahead of everybody before they could even reach the first turn.
Yes, the legendary ponies were just that special.
Neigh!
The end.
- COMMENTS
Leifsonabout 2 years agoThis has been a fun series. I didn't quite know what to make of this when I started reading the first few sections. But then I read some of your other stories, and got a sense of your writing style. Sure many of the characters are over-the-top and close to outright caricatures. Brittany frequently manages to offend as well.
But the story grew on me, and I liked it better as I ready along. Found the motivations of the various pony girls interesting, along with the idea of kind of a flip post-BSDM era for the story setting.
