All Comments on 'Girls Just Want to Tan'

There is a place called Richmond Sauna about 20 miles away that she would certainly enjoy.

Good story but needs some editing.

Left unused. Sorry, but this one didn't do it for me.

Thanks for being honest and not nasty about it. I was trying some different ideas with this one and wasn't 100 percent sure what would work and what wouldn't. Writing about being nude seemed silly without getting right to the action. People wanted a bit more plot and I am going to try that next time. Overall most seem ok with this one but I am using it as a learning experience. I am actually reusing some of these characters for another story, might be my summer submission or just a one off. I haven't decided yet.

I absolutely loved this story. I love exhibitionists! My own wife used to walk to the pool naked on Saturday and Sunday. This was at a huge family apartment complex too. She regularly fucked guys there as well. It was common for there to be a few used rubbers on the kitchen counter when I got home from work. Since she only made about one in four guys use a rubber, she had lots of stories to tell me as i ate her out. Angie sounds like a girl as perfect as my wife had been

The sex is hot but you surely need a proofreader.

Not bad, keep writting. I could see these guys coming back for a part two