All Comments on 'Girls Night In'

by poutylips17

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Anonymousalmost 18 years ago

Too short

You could've made this a lot hotter. After such a good start, it was suddenly kiss, suck, end of story. Good story writing can't and shouldn't be rushed. You've shown the talent with this to be able to produce a longer piece of work that'll keep us all wet!

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Anonymousalmost 17 years ago

You could have left out the SHIT HOLE play

It might have been good then, but, boys will be boys

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