All Comments on 'Girls Night Out Ch. 03'

Great story line. I loved reading this series. You should continue to write more of this story. I can't wait to read what happens next.

I enjoyed your interaction of thoughts and words expressing the desires the women felt. First times are always enjoyable to read and yours was that. Look forward to reading more of your stories. Lance.

I've enjoyed your stories also.

Bob

Sensitive, erotic and intelligent treatment. Keep up the fine work.

An exceptionally strong 3-part story, one that makes deliberate use of all the real-life fluctuations of ambivalence, doubt, and desire to create an ambience of extremely exciting adventure as these two characters, one the huntress and the other prey, slowly dance around each other, neither at all sure how far either of them will go. --One of those stories that rewards re-reads, and keeps its fresh appeal

I enjoyed the way things played out over the course of the story from chapter to chapter. The story ends fine the way it is, but like most I have a curiosity to see how Amanda's life evolves after her revelation of how good it can be. Thanks for sharing your words.

This is well written and a nice story. Some of the dialogue is unnecessary and cumbersome but it is well done.

Anonymous - thanks for your comment. I'm curious about your views on the dialogue, and would like to hear more specifics. Please PM me if you see this, thanks.

A well paced story. The characters are interesting. And though we are not at the climax, the journey is well worth while.

That was the first ' Lesbian ' story I have read and I am now converted. Great story. Well written. Thanks.

Thanks, limestone. Many of my other stories have lesbian themes as well, so I hope you'll enjoy them too.

Sorry, that should have been "lowkeyone" - bad autocorrect!