by adonlibere
Always let the story simmer,never let it get to full boil right off the bat, so your doing fine. Great job, I wish I was part of it lol
Yes, it is slow, but so nicely told, that it is now harm to invest the patience. As has been said, it still has so much potential in every direction. Could just get a romance story with nice friends helping Jenny overcome her inhibitions, maybe some conflict whether to love Kristin or April ... or the sorority might be a real lesbian coven, and they are drawn in by their drift to conspiracy and lust ... Nodding and waiting!