All Comments on 'Girls of Alpha Beta Delta Ch. 13'

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BillyslateBillyslateover 4 years ago
A Wasted Chapter Resulting From Ending

I am not normally enthused with "BDSM or Control" in Lesbian Erotica, however had actually enjoyed many of the previous chapters in this story. This chapter ended quite stupidly, since a "Freshman Initiate" was beaten with a ruler because she needed to attend class. Subsequently, she will be late for her class smelling of Sex, which will possibly cause undue issues with the Professor and other students.

I rated most of the other Chapters. 4 or 5-Stars, however this Ch was basically appalling, affecting Jenny's ability to attend her class which is why one matriculates at a university.

For me the ending distracted from the first part of Ch. 13, which was presented quite nicely.

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