by adonlibere
I've always enjoyed this tale, and as a whole, it's great. But it is seriously losing steam now. You really need to have some type of impactful event, or consider just wrapping it up while it's still close to its prime.
Thanks for reading and thanks for your feedback. I have a few more chapters written that I'm going to post, and then we'll see.
LOVE your writing. This has been a continuously great series.
Just hope you aren’t trying to “force” stories - a few seem like they are falling into the bucket of “I’ve gotta write something” and those are the ones that disappoint. Look forward to another semester- just don’t force it.... only forcing should be by theSenior girls...