All Comments on 'Girls of Alpha Beta Delta Ch. 63'

by adonlibere

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Losing steam

I've always enjoyed this tale, and as a whole, it's great. But it is seriously losing steam now. You really need to have some type of impactful event, or consider just wrapping it up while it's still close to its prime.

adonlibereadonlibereover 3 years agoAuthor
We'll see

Thanks for reading and thanks for your feedback. I have a few more chapters written that I'm going to post, and then we'll see.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hmm

LOVE your writing. This has been a continuously great series.

Just hope you aren’t trying to “force” stories - a few seem like they are falling into the bucket of “I’ve gotta write something” and those are the ones that disappoint. Look forward to another semester- just don’t force it.... only forcing should be by theSenior girls...

adonlibereadonlibereover 3 years agoAuthor
Yes

That is very perceptive, thanks.

groomleadergroomleaderalmost 3 years ago

Still enjoying it, still going strong, IMHO.

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