All Comments on 'Ӕgir's Captive Pt. 02'

yay thank you for continuing with the story can't wait for the next installment

Interesting very interesting.....please continue don't make us wait too long, pretty please with whipped cream and a cherry on top😘

So glad you've returned to this story. It's always deserved a re-visit. Looking forward to its unfolding.

don't make us wait another 3 years to find out what happens next. You've provided so many tantalizing hints of future developments, I can hardly wait!

There are 3 more finished chapters awaiting review by my beta reader. Once that is done I will post them. In fact, I am off to work on the 4th right now.

2015 is the year I finish things...so look for the end of this one and a few more of your favorites. No Survivor...no starting new stuff...just finishing off old business. Happy?

Kirsty is not going to take this lightly. Cannot wait for chapter 3 and the explosive aftermath. :)

Very happy. Thank you, Ms. Neale!

Well written, purposeful and direct. No worries about "but that's kidnapping!" whiners, you've made that clear from the go. I like the dynamics you're creating, looking forward to seeing where you take this story.

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Wrong about the geography of Tilbury!! And it's the Netherlands!! Holland is just an area in the Netherlands. Please check your spelling and countries (cookies? Biscuits!!) Before publishing. If they live in Finland they wouldn't be able to work from 14. Also after school they have 2 years national service to do, men and women....and then they are reservists and do training each year....