All Comments on 'Give Me a Little Credit Here'

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stroudlestroudlealmost 6 years ago
5 🌟

The feeling of being on hold is something most are familiar with and the dreadful music. That is dedication to stick it out so long .

Donna and Valerie seem real due to the writting style , nicely done . I liked the mix of who was telling the story.

I laughed along with this , the silly questions asked by the machine .

Loved this and looking forward to read the sequel.

Thank you

Jc

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