All Comments on 'Give Me that New Religion'

A clever opening, keeping the reader in the dark until the second half of the second sentence. Fot those unfamiliar with your work, even until the third.

As a writer, your poetic license is of course undisputed. There is, however, always some danger in quoting or paraphrasing Scripture. You are not clear about the source of the money that made the monastery such a splendid place. I doubt the parallel with Jesus and his Merry Men extends this far, cf. Luke 8,3 :-)

I am a bisexual female, one of my greatest fantasies is a threesome with two bisexual males. So I have obviously some interest in gay males. I came across this story by accident and started reading it, I couldn't put it down, I found it so hot. I ended up masturbating to a full orgasm, I am going to read another, I found it to be so hot 5*.