by Alex De Kok
Actually, the bang felt like a distraction to me. Of course, that could just be because I'm the sort that likes love stories, but ... it was a bit sudden. It's not that I mind an adventure, but the transition was jarring.
Sad to see this part hasn't received more comments so far,
it is a great story, I love it.
I had to laugh at the ending (because of the explanation, I shall keep that in mind).
Hoping that you decide to continue it at some point since there is so much still unexplored.