by Alex De Kok
Excellent read, so glad that you are back to work on it and best wishes for your health and strength to be improved on a daily basis. Be well.../A
Since we are able to read this for free, I am always amazed when someone starts to knit pick the authors offerings. This is a very good story that you have been able to keep the facts straight even after the missed years. One would not know that it wasn't written at one setting. Sorry for your loss and health issues, I can understand them myself. Wish I had the talent to share but have never been able to put my stories onto paper. Thank you for sharing and I hope you can continue. God Bless.
I haven't seen anything to nit pic about. This tale is told in amazing detail with the scale of incredible depth. Thank you for all the effort to entertain us. It is appreciated!!