All Comments on 'Giving in to Temptation'

I loved the set-up and can't wait to see what happens next! Five stars and a favorite point!

Great start and build up!

Same as sex4lf57. waiting to see what's next.

Realistic build up.

That's it? If that's all there is -- and the lack of a chapter number is usually an indication of that -- it's not much.

If that's the way you are going to end your stories, I will not be reading any more of your stuff. Those 5 stars ended up being 2 stars because of the end.

****Hot start a lot of anticipation and masturbation. Looking forward to the next act!! Good read. Thank for sharing.

Very good so far but you have to give us more. A priovisional five stars.

Just like the best dramatic TV shows...they leave you anticipating the next show. Exactly what you have done here...left us looking forward to the next chapter.

Just don't make us wait too long. Excellent start!

Agree with Baulloyder68. Hate a tease.....started out a 5, ended a 2.

Thx for the story! Love the way it is building up, and hope you write about how the mom tries to resist, but cant in the end.

Ok, just finish the story. Maybe the expert critics could write better, maybe not.

The Ah-Ha moment takes a little time to hit fruition. Beautifully written exploring the urges of each taboo thought.

Please please don't tell me you're going to leave us (and the mother and son) hanging. There's too much invested with the character development drew me and others in. This story is worth another chapter at least.

This was a tease you get a 2