All Comments on 'Giving My Step-Mom what She Needs'

I loved it! The only thing that would have made it better for me was if she had referred to herself as Mom while they were fucking. Five stars and a favorite point!

Based on the tags, I think this has something to do with a step-mother? ;-)

Hot story. The ending was a little bit of a let-down; I'd either make the ending more long term (it's pretty incomplete) or else leave it out completely and have this just be about their encounter, leaving the door open for more later if you wanted. Just my 2c. 5* regardless.

Another fine offering from you.

I do hope for more of this one.

Or something equally as hot.

Titillating.

That was very good.

Very good story!! So beautiful!!

Great story, well written and erotic. Not fussed on the ending personally, but anything else would have needed another chapter.

Very good story. If you want to make it better, more detail from mom about what she is thinking, what she wants, and more dialogue is always better. Go slow! Lots of foreplay. Make the story more about her than about him. And anyone can write good descriptive sex, dialogue is crucial.

Hot, big tit, stepmom. Totally hot and very erotic. Massage is one of the best ways to get a woman to go beyond her comfort zone and to climax. Well written. 5 stars