by gnomelander
Wonderful writing, I thoroughly enjoyed it and found the rather unique style of dialogue very refreshing. I have a weakness for older women and an interest in age play and age differences so this piece really held my interest. Thank you, I shall enjoy reading your other works.
Lovely story, very sensitive and thoughtful. I am sure that we all wish that we had had such an experience.
Boy , what a story !
Had me hooked from the very start and have to say shed a tear at the end .
Exquisitely written love story! This story was beautifully illustrated by the author’s masterful brush strokes and word palette.
I do not posses the literary craft to express the quality of this submission.
Sweet and sexy all the way, I love the innocence and kindness going along with the heat and passion
What beautifully told story, sexy and engaging throughout, thoroughly enjoyable. Part of the engagement for me is the settings in Camden Town Kentish Town and Marylebone, all areas of London I am most familiar with. I was born in a house on a residential street between Camden and Kentish Town and as a child I roamed all over that part of London with my mates. Hampstead heath, Parliament Hill, (Parly Hill to us), and Regents park were our playgrounds. I became familiar with Marylebone when my work was based in offices on the corner of Old Marylebone Road. A wonderful story stirring good memories for me, thank you.