All Comments on 'Giving Permission'

cwbuddy sounds jealous! Grin.

Of course it's the same old thing - that thing we all come here to read about!

Sure it stretches the usual a point or two, but again, that's what we come here to read about!

Just don't leave it at that. I want to read the sequels and the prequels - maybe not in chronological order. Tell us about the women planning this (they must have!); about how they all met, way back when; about what Mary did when he got home; about the foursome yet to come...

Keep going - and ignore comments from prats!

The story was pretty good. I like how everything flows and would love to read more.

Criticism can be helpful, but the blunt idiots who don't contribute any stories should be ignored

And it might be worth it

probably a fantasy of many couples who hang out with another couple where there's a bit of sexual tension in the air. mjg99@hotmail.com

The story is absolutely great. You develop your characters well, sometimes a little slowly for a short story but still well developed. The pace drops a little where hubby is trying to persuade other to go up but a little editing in your stories will fix that.

Literotica have editors and proof readers that will help with puctuation, phrasing and spelling.

These comments are meant to be helpfull and are not negative. Love your style and your sense of the erotic. Wish you lived near me and you were Pam . . .lol

Just love it . . .now I am off to read your other stories.

Thanks for writing them

CC

been there done that

Like your attitude even if its only fiction

I loved it and would love to be in this situation, regardless which man in your story. The openness and the sharing of a wife is erotic. My wife and I fantasize about this a lot and we want to try it eventually. We have great sex after reading or watching similar situations. Thanks!

this is handled well, but it isn't as mature a piece as some of your other, submitted work. the psychology isn't explored as well as in works submitted later.

I liked the story but, it seemed like you were following a formula. I think you have the potential to do much better work. By that,I mean unexpected twists in the story line or plot.

Overall, this is close to reality in many ways and more important, enjoyable.

Wow! And Pam is not on the Pill? So she wants to have your baby so the two of you can learn how to fold diapers together while you make yet another rug-crawler?

I liked it. Sometimes readers can get too analytical...sometimes just read it and enjoy.

wow, a banned profile, good going