All Comments on 'Giving Thomas Control'

You give us a glimpse into the mind of this self-torturing woman, caught between her choice of sensations. The warmth and wider thrust of his thrusting cock, or the hot/icy slice of pain on her body. Both localized sensations that rush through her whole body.

You leave the two at a curious place, will there be more, or do you feel a brief satisfaction is all this story needs.

Yes this woman child is fascinating. The young man is even more of a mystery as is the situation.

Your characters exist in a vacuum. You do this very well.