by Mostodd07
First story of yours that I read 4 stars.
Part 2 please and thank you.
Saw the Mom / Daughter angle earlier. The final scene with Beirut / blackmail read like you wanted to end the story but could not think of a way. This was inconsistent with the story / personalities / etc.
I really liked the story, it had me wanting to know what happens next. I was expecting some sex scene to develop but it was erotic without that. I liked the contemporary realism of the setting. Overall, a good read - thanks..
Well done.
The photo scenes were erotic
and very well written.
So was the character of Sally well written.
If there was a flaw in this story,
it was Andreas.
Everybody else has a character.
He was a nobody.
Still, this was one fine story.
Top ratings from me.