All Comments on 'Glamour Shots'

There was no talking in this story or what?? That was a terrible story, i was being nice just giving you this rating.....If you try again which I don't recommend, please be more discriptive, more detail and dialogue would be nice too. I don't know what you were thinking when you wrote this honestly!!!!

Disregard the asshole that was first to comment. Some people are just totally stupid.

Give me an 18 yr old hottie and I will spend some money on her too, and do anything else I can to get her out of her panties!!! Good story!!! I could identify with it very well!!

In fact, I would delete it (the anonymous sign-on says it all). This was a most enjoyable story.

your story was too rushed, especially during the movie and the drive home.

you should try more build up and yes in their own ass-hole way the other poster was right about the lack of description and i DON'T recommend you stop writing, you'll get better. by the way, i like the uncle and niece theme.

your story was too rushed, especially during the movie and the drive home.

you should try more build up and yes in their own ass-hole way the other poster was right about the lack of description and i DON'T recommend you stop writing, you'll get better. by the way, i like the uncle and niece theme. and maybe leave out the blood

Lol

Enjoyable. Dialogue would have been nice, but I still had a nice hard-on going, and isn't that what counts?

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