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All Comments on 'Gliese Chronicles - Sakcore Explored Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Nice job. It draws the reader in and keeps them involved.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassabout 3 years ago

As sci-fi stories go, this one is erotic and imaginative. Looking forward to future chapters.

Ravey19Ravey19about 3 years ago

Gentle start slowly building up to both the erotica and the excitement of what's going on.

nthusiasticnthusiasticabout 3 years ago

Constantly Changing POV Confusing

With the point of view changing frequently without any indication, I was often confused who exactly was the current narrator, which was quite distracting.

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