All Comments on 'Gliese Chronicles: Thin Margin'

I liked this, I am a military sci-fi buff anyway. Looking forward to the next installment.

I hate getting started on a great story and then waiting for the rest of the chapters to be finished!!!

So get to it:)

Hi Rachel,

I did not leave a comment when I read this and I should have. (I hate touch keyboards)

This is a new genre for you and you pulled it off well. It has a marked difference from your romances. I like your smart, skilled, women in charge characters.

I even enjoyed your "Holy Shit" cliffhanger. Be careful with cliffhangers in Literotica. Many authors here do not write the next chapter for years if ever. Instead of encouraging readers to come back they can backfire. I have authors I no longer read because they don't follow up or decide chapters are just paragraphs between cliffhangers. Cliffhangers are a commitment from the author to follow through.

That said, I will be watching for the next installment of the Gliese Chronicles.

Thank you for sharing your stories.

Terrific start. At least one more episode is required to relieve the cliffhanger. Suspenseful and ingenious. Five and a Fave.

At first sight I pronounced your name as "Raw Alice" - no offense meant - while previously enjoying your romances.

Finaly starfleet meet the wolf pack 😜