by Watchtower44
The basic concept is promising, but several minor issues annoy. What's being described is not really a classic glory-hole, but more like a classic peep-show with an added glory-hole element. That's probably unrealistic, FWIW. Also, the narrator calls the main female character first "My girlfriend" then later "My wife". The narration makes it sound like sometimes the time between inserting a token and the blinds going back down was much longer than others.
Great fun, ignore the comments that get technical. It was a sexy story that has the desired effect of getting me wet.
I imagined it was me!