All Comments on 'Glooryhole Surprise'

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Grayhorse1960Grayhorse1960almost 2 years ago

I remember one of those rooms in the Pink Pussycat...fun times...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The basic concept is promising, but several minor issues annoy. What's being described is not really a classic glory-hole, but more like a classic peep-show with an added glory-hole element. That's probably unrealistic, FWIW. Also, the narrator calls the main female character first "My girlfriend" then later "My wife". The narration makes it sound like sometimes the time between inserting a token and the blinds going back down was much longer than others.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Nice story, hope things go further in a future episode.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great fun, ignore the comments that get technical. It was a sexy story that has the desired effect of getting me wet.

I imagined it was me!

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I write for fun. Most of my stories are just that. Stories! So those readers (almost all 'Anonymous') should bear that in mind. If they don't like the themes I write about, please tell us all why you read them in the first place. Any truly negative comments from people like th...