All Comments on 'Gloria and Miss Andrews'

The dialog was stilted and any lesbian I know would be rolling on the floor laughing her ass off.

Sorry, stick to heterosex.

I dont know what the other guy that left a comment was thinking, I am a guy with lots of lesbian friends and they even read it it is a good story they thought so too. Good job, keep up the good work

Just not mine kind of beef. Lost me when they started peeing.

i never thought i'd f find a teacher/student piece to be dull and boring --- with nary a glimmer of a twitch in my panties---but you managed to succeed in providing me with that experience.....it's something about the dialog and the almost clinical description of every action and reaction.

certainly the amount of urine-related erotica makes me wonder if this story would be more comfortable in the fetish category, instead of (oh, dare i say this) in main stream lesbian land.

suffice it to say that of off to find another place to satisfy my purient needs, but urge you to give a rewrite a shot...(after feedback from women of the ilk you describe--who would seduce all their beautiful students given the chance ;-))

cheers,

alli'a

Just great, especially the watersports element of the story. Would love to read more from this author