All Comments on 'Glory Beyond the Hole'

This is a great story only comment I have is spelling but its free erotica so I couldnt care less I can't wait to read more of your stuff also I love longer stories like this!

You know a story is good when you're skimming the porn to get to more story... really good work.

This was a delightful, warm, sexy hot story which so well touched on what it is like in the day of a Gurl.

Love the story.

Greace

I clicked this story to just have a quick go at myself and now 2 hours later I'm a mess of tears and pleasure; This is story was a gem and such a lovely love story, I fell in love with the characters in such a deep way that I just want to read a whole book(or books) with both of them, you are an amazing writer.

Thank you.

What a sweet love story. The scene in the apartment when they finally bared their souls to each other brought tears to my eyes. Thank you.

Well done , l enjoyed the story I really liked the mystery

I’m a cross dresser and love glory holes,one of my favourite visits l had planned a visit late summer evening about dusk. I spent a extra amount of time and care getting ready, black 31/2 pumps black stockings held up with a white garter belt

White bikini panties and white matching bra mid thigh pleated black skirt and soft v neck cotton top l slipped on a light jacket to be comfortable, l carefully did my makeup and dark long haired wig and a rope chain with small hoop earrings l then painted my nails a very bright pink, checking in the mirror for any adjustments. All

Looked great and

feeling pretty l got in my vehicle and drove to a parking lot close to the adult store

That l knew cross dressers were welcomed l parked and walked the few blocks to the shop l met several people as l walked if they thought l was anything but a woman out walking down the sidewalk no one commented. I stepped into the shop and was greeted by a very perky clerk at the counter, in my best girly voice l asked for 20$ worth of tokens and casualy asked if she had been busy? She commented that

There were several patrons in the peeps but sales were slow, l thanked her and turned leave, she told me to have fun with a nice smile.

Once inside the peeps l slowly walked around looking for an empty booth next to a busy booth, several men were loitering around trying not to notice me l was a bit nervous but managed to stay calm as l walked by two men standing together talking

I was certain that one of them touched my bum l choose a both next to one that was busy and locked the door after getting comfortable l checked out the next booth there was a man in it stroking a very nice and very hard looking cock mmmmmm making sure my legs were on display for him l put a painted nail on the glory hole and gave a little circle motion he obviously was interested because a very nice looking hard penis with a droplet of precum glistening at the pee hole came through the glory hole

already on my knees l gently licked the tip and the penis throbbed a bit l watched as he forced his balls through also I thought he must like having his balls sucked as well as his cock, l sucked his cock in giving him a good sucking before mouthing his balls

He smelled very clean and his cock was like a piece of pipe l sucked him hard and when he was close to coming l sucked his balls when his thrusting became very urgent l sucked my mouth tight on his cock as he pumped my mouth hard l could feel his cock swell and pulse as he deposited a huge load of salty thick cum in my mouth l could feel his balls moving up and down in his sac. Before l was done swallowing there was a knock on my booth door, taking a moment to clean up a bit l unlocked the door, an older man about 60 or so ushered in with a noticeable bulge in the front of his pants, l stared at it as l slowly rubbed the bulge he seemed to know what he wanted as he unzipped his pants and opened them l extracted his semi hard cock

Giving it a few strokes l licked his tip and asked what l could do for him he chuckled and said l was doing just fine l sucked his cock and sucked his balls he fucked my face hard and burst a big load of sweet cum deep in my throat wiped his dick off on my face thanked me and left.

After a few minutes another man came into the booth next door unzipped and put his cock about half way through the glory hole l could see he was very ready to be sucked off so l licked his cock head he pushed it through and l sucked him till he filled my mouth with his slimy nut juice, I sucked two more guys to completion

Freshened up straightened my clothes got my purse and left the peeps still a few men loitering two of them said Good Night l gave them a happy smile and bade them good night

As l walked by the counter the same perky clerk said good night and guietly asked if l had found what l was looking for with a small wink, l smiled and told her five times!!

And Good Night

makes me want a hard cock to suck!

What a wonderful story, your descriptions evoke such emotion, I felt as if I was there through each experience good and bad, I especially enjoyed feeling free as you described once finding your other half or equal , such a release of emotions combined with physical pleasures I could not have imagined on my own, so Thank you :) Loved it!

XX Maddie B.....

What a wonderful piece. You captured so many emotions that come with being a gurl. Something makes me think there is some real life experience being expressed in this work.

Enjoyed it so much I read it twice very hot !

Great work, how about a sequel?

I couldn’t stop reading. Once you hooked me , I never put it down

Absolutely the best story I have ever read on this site. Love it!!

Great story loved it very erotic. Their were a few errors but it was definitely still enjoyable to read. Thanks

Loved your story!

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What a lovely story. I could have been Rose or Michelle with me being such a romantic.

Well done!

Such a heartwarming, important, and sexy story. I look forward to reading your other work.

A beautiful and arousing love story, thanks for the great read.

Kept me hard all the time I was reading it. I had my first tranny last month, some of the best sex I have had. Glad you found happiness

This is the third time I've read this story. It's just as fresh and wonderful as the first time.

Great love story with lots of hot sex that kept me hard and leaking precum.

long post but worth it i just had to finish it. great sex scenes i am still hard and wanting

That took a while developing the narrative, but it was worth the wait. I continued reading to the end, even though I'd already cum. That's high praise.

loved it, makes me wish I was one of them

Hi . YKN,

I really connected with your story. I'm a occasional tgurl that luvs to get out and about. I also sometimes dress in the gloryhole video booths at a local sex shop. 10$ admission till 10 pm! I'm a bit of a slut that has been hurt and felt the joy too. I really enjoy the power I have over men, they are so easy! lol. But really I like trans best....

Ty for writing your story

Lynn

Love it! Congratulation

This is my absolute favorite story on this... I wish I could have something like what Rose has

Irrespective of gender, this story works. Great read and oozes honesty of emotions.

Keep up the writing, you have a natural talent.

Loved it! You presented a fully developed character to which many readers can relate.

being a man, I have met 2 t girls, I didn't react at all like the guys in your story. It was a beautiful experience, which I will never forget !!

I guess in my experience this is a little unlikely, but you made your characters so real and so deserving of finding each other that I was really taken up with the whole story.Is there a follow-up ?... I'm about to find out...

Paul

A truly beautiful story...keep writing.

BTW, having had relationships with transwomen, I can assure you, I would have never reacted as the guys in the story

I really fantastic story. Hot se y and human a tough mix

Excellent piece! I really enjoyed the pacing and how I really got to know Rose and how she felt. Too many stories on this site are all just straight into hardcore stuff. But I prefer this style. Thank you so much!

Loved your story! Sexy & sensual while somehow describing what my own life’s experience has been in the dating world. Most cis-gender people are happy to be close friends but would NEVER consider dating me. Not women and not men. Many of those men would assault me or worse if they thought I was even flirting with them. Most Lesbian women won’t date me either, but there have been a couple who were open to it. Bi women are my best opportunity, but as is the case for most of my life, they love me as a friend, but have Zero interest in dating a ‘Freak’, as I have been referred to for too many years. Loved your story. Still looking for my own fairy tale ending. I’m sure it must be out there!

I really enjoyed your story. Like others commented, it seemed to come from a place of personal experience and thus added realism.

I would hope that TG people reading this would find reassurance and know there is someone, somewhere for them to share their life with.

If my situation were different, I would pursue a relationship with a TG gurl. Having been with both women and men, I now find that neither provides me with all I desire sexually, but I truly believe I could find that wit a TG person.

Keep up the good writing!

Such a rich, deep and ultimately fulfilling story. You have created passion and emotion mixed with naughty sex.....love it!

Do hope there is another adventure for these two ?

That was actually a touching story...a super dirty tale but very touching. Thank you. Nicely done.

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Your story reached one of my deepest fantasies; to experience romantic anal penetration as in your sexy tale! Thanks so much; you are one of my favorite authors on this site!

I loved the intensity when Rose confronted Michele at her home.

Will their be more 👀

Well done and full of good information, you write with a lot of feeling and understanding of the life style, something I have always wondered about! You add a personal touch that makes the story hot but full of real love for another person.

I appreciate the combination of emotional and physical detail. It feels like a whole, real experience that’s emotionally plausible. I loved it. Thank you.

I have read this several times now and ever since the first time I am very mindful of my morning tooth brushing.

Hot story.

As I have gotten older I have definitely become more comfortable in my sexuality, and its made me much more accepting of whatever I find in my partner's pants. There might be surprise but never disgust.

this story is one very hot and well written was so mind blowing kept me wanting more so good write more please

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This the most complete and well written story that I have had the pleasures to read. Great character development and you really became engrossed in their growth. Please keep up the efforts and I look forward to reading more from you.

I typically don't read any of these stories longer then 2 or 3 pages max, but your story has stayed on the best of list for such a long time I decided to give it a go and see if it was for me. I can honestly say that this was the best story that I have read. Your writing and character development is really good in such a short space. It makes u feel for the characters - something every short story that I read is missing. This makes the sexual moments that much better when reading them. In short I loved this story. Looking forward to reading more from u.

Hot story with a unique angle. Thanks for sharing.

You write it like you lived it, can't wait to read more of your stories.

So touching and wonderful while highly erotic. How wonderful that she found a connection with someone who truly felt as lost, hurt and angry inside. So beautiful the such a square peg found her other with whom it would seem she rounded her niche in society. Truly positive and easing the sorrowful ache of lonliness in my own soul and heart. Thank You.

I was married to a shollow woman for 16 years then looking through the closet there were a lot dresses and such i tried a few on, next came hair removal silicone topped fishnets,heels, panties with a corset and wig! I looked in the mirror and thought damn i'm not bad, do i dare go out like this! I did! Guys hit on me a yuppy bar and i sucked my first cock and liked it! I felt complete for the first time in my life no guilt I just smiled! It wasn't a glory hole but this story made me smile!

I had a ‘date’ with a gorgeous brunette ( Lorna ) in London - I met her in the hotel bar - she was statuesque with long legs , long black hair and big firm tits !!

After a few drinks I ascertained she was staying on the same floor and so invited her for a nightcap in my room - she accepted saying she couldn’t stay long she had an early call the next morning . We relaxed with a drink on my sofa and chatted idly about life in general , she didn’t rebuff me when I kissed her ... emboldened , I slid my hand up her tight skirt , that’s when she stopped me saying

“ I don’t think this is a good idea Charles .. I’m not what you think I am “ ....

I ignored her and continued up her long legs ( she was wearing stockings and suspenders ) .. my fingers reached her panties - and a ‘bulge ‘ ... she had a cock!!.. I looked into her eyes and smiled

“ oh Lorna .. “ I gasped as I tugged her skirt up to reveal her bulging panties !

“ you ok with this ? “ she breathed as I tugged them down to release it ( it was bigger than mine )

My answer was to slide down and lick the head - nectar of the gods !! -

Lorna spent the night fucking me and I loved it

That was a beautiful story

This story is far more than "just smut" and I loved just about every word of it. This is the kind of emotion and poignant moments I strive to include in my own work. I will admit, I expected it to go a different direction at first, but where you took me was far more interesting and I am glad I went along for the ride.

Will have to read more n.n

Glorious combination of emotion, sexual desire, sex itself, self discovery and finding love and acceptance. Thank you.

That was an amazing story. I loved the intensity of the characters. Very good writing.

I really liked your story. Your character Rose was very well done. Keep up the good work!

That truly was a beautiful story! I loved every second of it!

amazing story loved the lead up and conclusion. one of my favorite stories so far

The living a whole transgender life without ever coming out to your surroundings or learning to openly deal with it socially was a bit of a stretch, but the resolution was a thing of beauty.

Thank you, this was equally beautiful and erotic. Great story!!!

Just love the details and emotion a fabulous story oh to meet a girl in that situation

This is by far one of the best stories I've ever read. I could feeling the sensation and feeling as my own.

I can't wait to read more of your work.

Ashli

The emotions, the feelings, so real.....I am a transgender girl and I totally relate how both of them felt ....I wish I have found that happiness and be free of my shackles

That story transcended porn. It was so intimate, sexual, and intensely emotional. I loved it!! Gonna read your other stories

Loved this. So many moments rang true.

That was incredible! I would love to meet two "girls " this deeply in love. I would enjoy being their play toy, then sent home to enjoy the tingle in my ass and the throbbing in my balls as I jack off!!!

This was a wonderful story that I came to more than once. It not only got me off, but made me feel good about it. I just wish that I could have been there in Dave's place. To show Rose love right from the start rather than hurt her.

This was more than just porn. This felt like a life lesson. Very well done

Wow, I was almost going through what Rose & Michelle did. Amazingly well written and edited too. Thank you.

I loved it keep, up the good work!

That's was an amazing piece of work!! I was enthralled by it from beginning to end!! It's was sweet and sad sexy erotic and has my mind exploding!!!!

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Really dirty, sad, touching, horny story you have written! This is the one of the best 5 erotic stories I have seen ever. You are the really great storyteller!

Very thorough and descriptive. Quiete realistic as well which is sad when you think about Rose's early disappointments in life. Although this is fictional, the cruelty faced by the characters is very real. Great story!

I loved this story. I thought it was well written and I felt for the characters in the story.

Once I started, I couldn't stop! 90 minutes of sublime edging, and I could relate, myself having somewhat out there sexual preferences and feelings. The eroticism of the anonymous encounters felt real, raw, just like anonymous sex is in real life. Thanks for a great, sexy read

Thank you for taking the time to write that piece. While I can't related to the experiences of the characters, I can empathize and I thought it was very realistic and I wasn't expecting any of it from the getgo. Great story.

I have to say that this story is the best that I have ever read, it had a sad beginning of years of heartbreak and resentment, tell y'all the truth, I thought that her first boyfriend was gonna beat her when he found out. But it didn't happen. Then she shut herself out of relationships. But towards the end of the story, she found out that Michelle, the "girl", that she was stalking for a week, turned out to be a transgender like herself, and one night of passionate sex, they both found out that they were perfect for each other. A few months down the road, she started to open up to other people like Dan, the guy who she coldly rebuked his idea getting a bite to eat. Towards the end, she agreed. It had a good ending and I liked the story very much.

best story ever read and had me so damn hot all the time was reading it . best wishes and keep writing , you are wonderful . kisses

This is one of THE best erotic porn stories I have read, it flowed beautifully, I was anxious towards the end but all in all, it's a MUST read.

I absolutely love your style of writing and how in depth you went into Rose and Michelle's stories, I was totally rooting for Rose to find a love that transcended gender borders, plus the story was horny as hell! Thank you for sharing.

I really like that I forget about time, made me remember that first time with some one just like me !

That is one of the best love stories I ever read and so erotic as well. Great attention to detail and emotions.

Keep up the good work

Author did super job of expressing the emotions and thoughts of the transgender characters. Very touching story.

Very hot. Thanks for writing

Thank you for writing this. It's beautifully written and is a heartwarming story as well. It's a wonderful thing when someone is able to find true love. This is the first story of yours that I've read, but now I can't wait to read the others!

I've been frustrated at the Literotica stories I've read lately. They seemed shallow and two duimensional. This restored my Interest. Great story development, engaging, and beautiful marriage of romance and erotic. Loved it.

Awesome love story. Characters are developed nicely. Way to get inside their heads, that's what makes the sex even better. Having had a few cocks in my mouth and ass and enjoyed some great head at a gloryhole makes these stories really exciting for me.

Great build up, great ebb and flow, thanks for sharing

This took me from a frustrating place where everyone had such a binary view that really emphasized how much it can hurt to hear that, all the way through two people finding love and having passionate sex. This story is fantastic and I can see the payoff from the great buildup.

All I can say is WOW, what a beautiful story. !!!!! Thanks for sharing.

Mostly I read heterosexual stories of cougars and milfs but this was something new and yet similar, the 19 year old Michele finding a life partner in Rose who was atleast a decade older than her was a big turn on for me.

And the moment when they had sex at Michele's apartment the story made me sooo horny that till the time Rose had made Michele squirt her jizz all around just by ass fucking her, it was too much for me to take in and I came too! Just by reading that! So thank you for this story, I had an absolutely great time reading it.

This is perfect. Thank you so much for sharing. It's both incredibly arousing and heart warming.

This one had me pretty interested

I found myself having to read a little at a time while stopped at

Red lights. Good work.

What a great story and amazing insight into the life of two trans girls.

The detailed description and romance is way off the charts. I have no word to explain how explicable it feels reading your story. The sex is no doubt wonderful, but the character development and the overall story-line, easily makes you my favorite author!

Thanks again :)

this was an engaging and wonderful story! i felt so horrible for the trials the character went through in the beginning, and ended with a feeling of happiness when they discovered each other. please keep writing!