by VivicaSnow
Well, I didn't think the silly content could get much higher for this story but every time it gets … well … sillier. What a nice thoughtful young lady she is, to be sure.
Totally erotic and enticing cos of the situation.
Gabbie is on hell of a girl.....LOL
FANTASTIC writing.
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Normally I can offer critique's and a variety of thoughts. This time I've got nothing but a burning fire inside at how hot this was. No flaws of any sort grammatically - but that's the best I can do because what I really want is more stories in this series! Excellent job, please keep them coming (yes, I meant that in every meaning).
Dear lord and baby jesus that was fucking HOOOOTT!! I don't even know where to begin!! This is an absolutely amazing series! Thoroughly enjoy your writing style. I saw a book cover I believe? Is that your book and how can I go about purchasing a copy?
Vivica, I am adoring this story. I just love the touches of humor, there is too little of that in most porn, so its a real treat and ads a great deal to my enjoyment. I try to ad humor to some my stories with some success, I hope. Please keep up your wonderful work, and remember it is greatly appreciated.
amy, an author elsewhere