All Comments on 'Go or Not Go For It?'

Winterfrog, this story was okay, but I didn't think it was up to your usual efforts. Why? The way you organized it. First comes the story of the cheating. Then comes a big background story. Then comes the getting together with the new woman. It felt like three separate stories and there was not a good flow between them. For one thing, I don't really care how they got together after reading about the cheating because the wife was not appealing. I think the story would have been a lot better without the big flashback in the middle.

Greetings:

A insightful glimpse to a far away place. Scandinavian culture has a librial reputation, you Sir have reminded us again that truth, trust and honesty are values not owned by any segment of society. Maybe I should say I appreciate the morality of your stories.

High Regard: Bill

The idea that the offended partners involved in an infidelity case like this find each other, is used so often that this story is a 13 on a dozen story. Well told though.

poorly constructed and a poor plot. GO or NOT Go For It was billed as a wife trying to decide if she should cheat. The story opens with the wife who had been obviously cheating for some time and on top of that they werent really married anyway.

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Once the cheating wife realized what she had done and was dumped by "the Bench" the story has No communication between the ex-husband and the whore wife.

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the entire 2nd half of story is about the exhusband and his new love.

the story line itself is very good. The jumps are sometimes confusing. Rushing into marriage normally isnt good, but then waiting two years or so isnt either. Party girls, are party girls, you cant change them. They may withdraw from the scene but like cheaters, given the opportunity and a self justification, they will act. Normally the only marriage that works for a party girl is a full couple swinging lifestyle. I wish you wrote more often, I really enjoy your stories!

Thanks!

No wimps in your stories Winterfrog. As always I enjoyed your writing. Your grammar was a little off on this one though. Im looking forward to your next story. Glenn in NC

Awkwardly written and hard to follow in places.

It could have been better yet if you had started with

the story of the meeting of Alexandra and our hero, and if

you had followed your title and told a bit about Alexandra's

internal conflicts on the cheating issue. Perhaps there should have been at least some wild oscillations in her behaviour at home before the big day.

I certainly enjoy your brand of the English language since it suggests that behaviour patterns maybe partially controlled by the form of language used.

I admit that I would have expected the wifey to drop everything she was doing -:) when he told her that he knew she was not at work! That is truly being fixated...

Did you ever try writing a story with the woman as the protoganist? It would be nice to learn something about the thinking patterns of Scandinavian women...

writers has done it again. Too bad some writers can't take the hint. But once a wimp...always a wimp...Good show Frog. marriedwithballs@yahoo.com

First off nice story I always like your stories well most of them anyway justice is always seen to be done.

Second off will you people from the USA stop tarring everyone with the same brush not everyone in the UK is wimp or a cuck in fact as your country is bigger than ours you probably have more than us. I suppose the problem is all the UK Wimps and Cucks are on this site!

I enjoyed your story. it was a nice read for my lunch yime today. I have enjoyed all of stories. please keep writing. jrj

This is an excellent story by an exceptional story writer. Cheating does not pay in the long run in any country, this one was Norway. Keep on writing, Winterfrog. RAG

Another winner!

Boyd

acceptance and in providing entertainment. So you bring much to this party that most understand and appreciate.<P>

Your open aggressive normality and quick response in delivering consequence is a breath of fresh air that many should emulate in their own style.<P>

Suffice it to say that you Author are appreciated and looked forward to - especially since you work in another's language which very few of us would even attempt.<P>

Thanks - With Very High Regard

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What more can I say?

This was very well done as always! <P>Thank you for the very good entertainment.<P>PT

Should have been titled "More than you wanted to know about Filip and Alexandra and Camilla and the Bench". Please don't post more stories like this.

The story may not be all that logical but I really enjoyed the story which, in my mind, justified the highest rating.

In the real world Alexandra would have custody and he would pay child support. That would not have actually been in the best interest of the children. However, "best interest of the children" is just legal garbage the courts use to do what they are going to do anyway even if the children are harmed by their decisions. In fact, the courts have little concern about what is best for the children.

only good to look at. TK U MLJ LV NV

Not enough revenge but a happy ending for the betrayed. Damn I hate that word.

Thanks for the offering.

Never confuse party girl/slut material with wife material.

Sorry, there was not a shred of original material in this story. The sports hero with a bad knee, the trophy wife who divorces him and married the other husband?

Come one.

It doesn't ring true in my experience. Any whiff of suspicion usually leads to spouse shutting everything down, at least for a while. I would like to have heard the wife's reasoning in this story, but otherwise it just makes her seem insane without any sense of self preservation. How does a woman like that cross the street successfully?

Classic Winterfrog story. Wife cheats, wife gone. Cheating partner gets his. No surprises, no problems. Good quick BTB.

I liked the story except for one thing. If I read the story correctly, it was only a week or two after he caught Alexandra cheating him that he professed his love for Camilla, the Bench’s wife. And shortly after that, they were married. That whole part of the story seemed too rushed for me. I did like the first part of the story, though.

Good btb

Might be me but seemed like he moved really quickly with her and began to love her after such a short time

Of course he moved quickly with Camilla. The story was only 2 pages long, leaving very little time, so he had to marry her before the story ended!

Too much of a happy ending but the beginning is very realistic.

BTB writers take a note - THIS IS HOW "FEBRUARY SUCKS" HAPPENS. Not in a moronic preposterous way "George Anderson" posted his drivel that everybody is sucking on now.

Solid story with a bit of a unrealistic ending but then again everybody in LW is looking for happy endings.

Donuts ain’t far off this time with his comment. This is Frog’s version of Feb Sucks.

putting on a happy face among the town. TK U MLJ LV NV

The story was written in 2008 . I don't believe GA used this story for his version. There already a lot of stories on wife falling for a superstar

Very...stilted, I think that's the word I'm looking for? Doesn't really flow all that well.

Quite liked it, a solid 4. Better, at least in my view, than most Winterfrog stories, because here the cheated-on husband ends up doing markedly better than the cheating ex-wife does. Justice, for a change. Meanwhile, must say this story has close to nothing in common with "February Sucks." A closer predecessor would be BigGuy33's "Unexpected Consequences." A lot of readers really didn't understand the main point of GA's story. Which is pretty amusing, since he laid it out very clearly in the preamble.

QM

I couldnt get past the first 4 paragraphs.

She dresses like shes going to get laid in an hour, like her husband isnt even there. Sadly anytime any time any writer just whips out the idiotic plot device of uncaring by the numbers LW wife, I find something else to read.

So typical...HO HUM!

The ending was stupid.

Ho hum is right

This dope really asked if they could sleep in the same room the first night? OH WHAT THE LITERAL FUCK! and these are the guys that fall ass backwards into relationships .... you know what? nevermind

The ending of this story felt as fatally rushed as this relationship will likely turn out to be...

How very scandi. I guess you know when you know, some people get it right and some don't. If only there were a magic way of divining successful matches, but there isn't. So unless you've lived a successful long married life you don't know shit, and even then you only know what worked for you. So suck it up haters.