by Jeff_Dearborne
Love it!! I hope there are more chapters where she becomes a whore for Shaun and it friends!! Can’t wait for the branding!!!!!
Hot ...very hot ... hope also for more chapters for her to be branded and becoming a real whore
All those words when you could have just stated you can't sexually satisfy a woman....
This idiot doesn't deserve even a cum dumpster like this, much less a good woman.
Some of these stories are so over the top I want to laugh at the mental state of those with those fantasies.
I only read it to the end to see how bad it was going to get.
I didn't even score it.
If this story were in the fetish category it would be a 5* effort, but because it’s in LW, 2*
Why is this guy even married? I mean what's the reason here? What is the point of this whole story? Simp stories really need to have their own category ....
my husband has been having me read these stories as he wants me to become a hotwife. Something about this story really got to me. The idea of her submitting to the neighbor really has my panties soaking wet right now. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Holy fuck. You must be the reincarnation of the great Greek poet Homer. This is quite possibly the greatest sex story ever written!
It is written well; but again a story that belongs in a racial category. What will the husband do for sex once Shaun takes over?
Looking forward for part 2. This is a 5 star.***** Would be 6 if it was available.
Interesting read, more extreme than I usually go for, but I'm all about preggo stuff. I'll have to see where the next chapter takes this. I do have to say though, I hate how AI has forever ruined things. Much like steroids in baseball, moving forward people will forever wonder if it was used and may never know the truth. I only say that because your stream of "yes and" sequence did give me flashbacks of what it often does.
Can’t wait for her to become pregnant with a black baby!! This needs a few more chapters to it. 5 stars!!!
Husband was stupid. It will end in divorce sooner or later. He will be emasculated to the point of not being able to stand to look at his wife.
first half as a fantasy was hot and a good story line. It all went to shit in the second half. The aspect of a CUCK story that most writers do not address is what and why would Tony do this? what would he get from it? Why would he want her to have Shaun's ' kid? why even be married as he could just pick some woman to Dom him? I know and have been around some,what I call weak people, however the weakest is this story. No real development but instead a lazy dialogue with no substance. Sorry very lame
I’m married to an Asian woman who’s only dated white and I want her to meet an attractive Blackman who decides to own her. I love the idea of him succeeding in getting her and taking advantage to have sex with her whenever he can. Sometimes I come home and and she gets there I can smell the sex from her.
I love kissing her and thinking of her sucking his blackcock when he wants. Her bent over in the car when her head going up and down till he cum in her mouth making her sallow.
You're story is well written but not my style. The story tags didn't warn me about pregnancy risk, a turnoff for me. I'll withhold star ratings since I shouldn't have been here in the first place
This story is just about the most ridiculous, complicated, ludicrous, piece of crap I have ever had the time to read. Pure crap, not even a believable story line in any respect. No star rating from me as doing that would suggest respect and/or appreciation from me.
Sorry, I thought I would give another one of your stories a try, but this is definitely in the wrong category. There is nothing loving about this wife, and absolutely nothing about the husband that is even remotely manly. Not for me will be moving on to another author. Your writing is good and very descriptive is just not believable. I don’t know what this pregnancy fetish is but that is the category that it should be in. There isn’t a man alive that wants his woman to get knocked up by another man,
that is the most demeaning, and humiliated thing that could possibly ever happen to a man.