by North200
Off to another great start!
Somewhere in Edward's future: "Hey man, remember that one time you got drunk and had sex with a goblin? Good times!"
...but I'll say it again.
I am so impressed with how different the tone of your writing is in this work, in comparison to your other stories. I'm a bit jealous if I'm honest. It's a sign that you're a true master of the craft.
I gave you a 4*
please keep this one going into a huge series and please don't make us wait more than a few days to a week in between the chapters. Better to write multiple chapters and post them one at a time then write one at a time and make us wait a couple of weeks to a month.
Thank you for sharing your stories! Such a pleasure...well proofed, and clever. I'm really looking forward to more of Ree.
:-D
As anonymous below cites: "If you can taste it you're not eating fast enough." I had to stop reading because I was laughing so hard!
I'm curious what will happen to Ree...
Please continue this arc. It has me hooked in these four pages!
Very good story. It's very creative. I love how you describe humans through her eyes. I never talked how strange we are! I can't wait to read more and find out w heat happens
..... with totally intriguing dialogue and female (?) lead. Am in love with Ree. More, more, and more.
Your Ree is so funny! She has no idea why Master was unhappy when she ate his cat, not to mention building a fire in the dining room! Ree is right. Humans do have a lot of rules and many don’t make any sense. LOL Thank you for sharing your talents with us. I can’t wait to see what happens next.
Excellent worldbuilding, enough detail for the story to work without going overboard while focusing on the important facets, the characters.