by TrampsAnThieves
Well with this you have cemented your place in my top 10 authors on this site.
I cannot wait for the next instalment.
Excellent start to this tale. I can hardly wait to see where TnT takes these characters!
Interesting start, well written, innovative plot/story. They merged their magic and she got unlimited powers and he got what?
Very interesting. The characters speak and think in their own voice adding so much to this magical world. I canāt say I understand any math that will allow a single female to breed her own army, a fact the character herself realizes. Perhaps allies will be sought for in chapter two.
Very well done, I hope i will read of many new characters, and donāt forget to show use your evil villain.
Very good so far! Now write more. please and thank you.
Goblin Queen is an āOutstanding Readā I was throughly absorbed in the story itself. Well Done!
More fantasy stories! Very well written, you are a good story teller, crafting interesting people with good detail!