All Comments on 'God-Blooded: The Sword of Fate 00-02'

to fellow writers. if you're using Word, do not even bother with italics on Lit. that entire flashback to Motoki's gempukku was supposed to be in italics. as well as every 'Meiyo'. still Love you Literotica.

i'm learning here.

first, if you're uploading from Word, you're screwed on your italics. Motoki's entire flashback to his gempukku and every mention of Meiyo and Kanshi were supposed to be in italics.

second, don't bother with centering your chapter heads. and if there's a poetic spacing component to how you write, forget it.

again, still love you Literotica.

Honestly.. I'd say either write in English or Japanese. This half-assed in-between is really tiring to read. Just because you know how to translate some words to the alphabet, does not mean you should. It just felt unreadable and unnecessarily weeby.

I have the novels but I haven't read them since HS, so imagine my surprise when I came across this story. I'm enjoying the ronin and his struggles!!!! Can't wait for this story to continue.