All Comments on 'God Of The Vampire Race'

I hope u continue ur story! I love this! Wonderful!! =)

Definitely intrigued, but get some chat lines going, not .. 'I asked him this and he told me that..' Give your characters some personality we can all feel and relate to. I find I get bored real quick when there isnt any dialog and just large blocks of paragraphs. Look forward to your next chapter.