All Comments on 'God Save the Queen'

The fascists regime/ they made you a moron/ a potential h bomb/ God save the queen/ she's not a human being/ and there's no future/ and England's dreaming/ dont be told what you want/ ectetra. Good song.

I want.. Ughh Please part 2

I absolutely love how well this is written and how descriptive each challenge is, how emotional each desperate choice is. I would love to read more of this story if it becomes something you continue (which is unlikely as most of your work is stand alone), but it is inspiring and sensual just as it is. I will be enjoying myself reading through your submissions for my future entertainment.

Thank you for writing this outstanding piece.

Cheers,

Sofia

best so far!

Although I normally believe that squeals tend to ruin stories, there is an interesting set-up for a plausible one in this particular story..

Awesome story. Hope you continue it with Auric's fall.

brilliant! more of this please