by Dirtypig_69933
Skimmed 1st couple sentences and ckecked if this was indeed a joke.
Don’t read smut and this is the depths of it. Not fun. Not erotic. Not worth reading.
This is pure rubbish. Nothing erotic, no depth and no plot! Get help and remove from this genera!RW
Wow. Didn't get beyond a quarter of the first page. Read a little at the end to see if it had improved. Not into rape of any sort. And that's what this is. This was awful. And nasty. And not based on sex. And about as lesbian oriented as Pence.
Just sick. I read it all praying she’d get away. No, it’s gonna get worse. What kind of mind fantasizes like this? You must seriously hate women, too. Hope you never write anything else
Loved this so much. Cant wait for the next part. I wish someone would use me like this