by dagan732
Love it, it´s greate the reflection that you make us think when we read Gabe´s talks to God... Can wait to read the next chapter and see how his date with Kyle went hope there happy....
Soon post soon the next one pleassse
Another brilliant chapter for this story.. About time Gabe.. but why stop lol next please... soon!!!
The chapter was great but you dragged Gabe's I'm not ready yet thing on for a lot longer than than necessary and it became a headache.
I hope they do live the gay American dream and that some jealous or confused persons dont try to come between them (although that would add to the drama)
When I read the summary, I thought he went back to the asshole. I'm sooooo glad it wasn't that :). Looking forward to the next chapter already!
Have enjoyed this story thus far. I look forward to the next chapter. I'm a sucker for gay romance. Hope to read more from you in the future.
Love the interaction between Gabe, Darren & Phil. Quite a few lol between those 3. Also love the progression between Gabe & Kyle.
this chapter was awesome. The car ride part had me actually laughing out loud (the oh-shit handle = hilarious)
I also really like the interactions of Phil,Darren and Gabe.
the story is getting better and better....Made me smile and laugh. Love where its heading!
Good grief, Darren is a hoot! And yay, way to go Gabe! Love how this is going.
Great characters and interaction, plenty of doubt to keep us going and lots of laughs. Plus you just keep adding in all those little moral pointers to make us think - "oh shit, should I be doing that?"
Please keep going
I feel like the conversations between Gabe and God are the discussions you wish you weren't afraid to have with your friends (or yourself). I especially like how Gabe is no longer giving into despair... With a good dose of humor this chapter rocked, and Darren totally wins the prize for "Gay Man With the Best Sense of Humor."
We have to know what happens next. Please do another chapter. Let us know how things turn out. Give us a truly happy ending.
I just loved Darren's taking "prom pictures!" The story is pretty good too! :)
I swear, I've teared up at least 8 different times at this story. This is a marvelous piece of literature. It's so deep and philosophical yet heartwarming and simple all at the same time. The emotions conveyed are so real and so honest; they continually strike a cord in me. "God" is such a fantastic character. There's so much depth and considering you had to express a higher being, a mystery in itself, I think you did a great job. Simply amazing.
Please please PLEASE let there be a happily ever after with Gabe and Kyle
I love all the characters and the world they live in - Gabe's office, the several places he visits where help is needed, the people they meet and how hard Gabe is trying to get his life on track, even though there are so many questions and it's soo scary - being hurt as he was, it's just not easy to open your heart to risk further wounding !
I just know Kyle will be there for him and Gabe needs to take a leap of faith ...
The story is not yet finished and I miss it already ... and all the guys !! :))
this resonates with me, so often in my life ive been looking for the great hit me from out of the blue kinda love when loving small, without thought and always to be giving is what lasts longer and what helps me getting over the blues
Such a beautiful and unusual story so far. I simply LOVE the GOD character. They are so realistic it's like GOD themself is talking. You have such wonderful insight and advice! It's truly a pleasure reading your work!