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duskyhazeduskyhazeover 2 years ago

Nice! Smells like a good, long series is on the cards!!

RamazaRamazaover 2 years ago

It has a feeling of being a bit rushed while writing it, but has potential but you should get an editor to help you to catch misspellings or missing words, but please keep up the good work

tmark0099tmark0099over 2 years agoAuthor

@Ramaza thank you for your feedback I really appreciate it.

@duskyhaze thank you!!!

TSreaderTSreaderover 2 years ago

A good start to this story. I'm looking forward to see where you take it!

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