by miss_D_mena
Very good story. Well written and erotic. Nice little plot twist at the end but a VERY happy ending
Read most if not all your past stories , and this one did not disappoint either , well done , please write more chapters .
A great holiday story, very hot and entertaining. The characters are quite animated and the kind one would love to be involved with. Another great tale, thanks for writing it's much appreciated 😊👍
Not sure about the end of the story. Will there be more, it feels like there should be more
Any man I know, including myself, would kill to be in that situation. Surely, this cannot be the end if it? It certainly seems like there could be. Great story, wonderfully written. 5⭐
First page was decent but you lost me with the unsolicited request that she have plastic surgery. Massive turn off
What a clusterfuck that turned out to be. It was a pretty good story but the ending kinda threw me for a loop. The author’s use of the word “fanny” confuses me. The context makes me think he’s referring to something besides a rear end, but I can’t figure out what. Still a good story. 4*s.