by Phantom300
Great job. Didn't go exactly the way I expected but the best stories don't.
I was Team Rachel BUT Rebecca is obviously the more realistic choice.
Although is it just me or did you leave things open for a sequel?
Nice. Was hoping he would at least give sex lesson to Rachel but still Winner and favorite
Overall a really good story. That bit with Oakley was just weird and could be removed with no loss to the storylines. You established she has issues from her service, no need to pile on.
Great story, well told. Kept me up past my bedtime but it was time well spent.
This was really good. You tied all the age and experience issues together well. The Oakley thing, I think, was a good reminder that life throws some things our way that we will never truly understand. In the end WE make ourselves happy.
Good buildups, nice pace but still needed a bit of proof reading. Had plenty of heat without going hog wild on spicier extra relations. A wholesome story with controlled spice, will be family fare in the next 5 years, ha ha ha It did not address the sorority not tying together Rachel and her mother to ding the guy's ID.
Likely the best constructed story Literotica has ever published. Those who have read it know what I consider the most important constructive step.