All Comments on 'Going Dutch'

Sensitive and very real. Well done! More, please! :-)

Good to read a sexy story about intelligent people! The fact that I've got a thing for redheads and accents doesn't hurt either...

This is my first effort, and I'm probably being overly sensitive to criticism, but I think the point warrants being made that spelling here is that used by her Britannic Majesty QEII, i.e. the Queens English, and spelling straight out of the Oxford English Dictionary.

I have and use an English-English spellchecker, and I proof-read THROUGH the entire work. I don't read THRU it, I read THROUGH it.

Thanks,

Arthfawr

This story is one for my "study" file! True, there are some spelling errors, but none that a spell checker would have caught, being synonyms. I also feel that the characters could have been more deeply developed, but from the ending, I gather that there are sequels on the way, so you have time to go into greater depth with their personalities.

The sensual lovemaking was quite intense and I frankly admit that I'm going to be studying this story for a long time...I like to pick up tips whenever I can.

Nice going, despite the minor problems!

Kydreamer

well done! I love a good story and this one was exceptional.

Keep up the great work.

George

It was very good, and I really enjoyed reading it. I don't normally read, I just write and I have to say some titles catch my interest as this one did and kept me until the end.

Finally, a story that stimulates all of the senses! I hope that there will be more. It flows well and the few grammar/spelling errors were not bad. I hope that there is more where this came from.

This is really something like fresh air compared to so many of those plain, dumb, fucking, so called, 'stories'. Though not a native speaker it caught me prisoner. I would LOVE to find a sequel (or more, hint, hint) which imho could very well go straight to the Romance section of the genre.

And as to the comments on spelling errors - well, to me they are sounding a little bit funny especially regarding from which country they do come from. I think, one should remember where the English language originated from and whatever one might assume: it was definitely NOT the USA ;-)

This has to be the most engaging, endearing story of the year. I want to meet Uncle Hywel.

Okay, first of all, I like your style and humour. Spellings are jarring though

'collum' should be column, 'celebate' should be celibate, past tense of lead is led, I led her into the room, 'crutch' should be crotch, and as for 'ginger', please use 'red' when referring to hair, it's much less insulting to redheads! Damo

Great Story! You do to her what I always want to do to a woman! ENCORE!