All Comments on 'Going Home - Home Again?'

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ender2k2k over 4 years ago

Thank you for this chapter

I am glad you are continuing the story. Merry Christmas. Thanks

oakbloke82 over 4 years ago

Thank you

So glad to see more of this story, please keep it coming :)

Anonymousabout 4 years ago

Good, but...

I’m annoyed that Jonas is being pressured into treating Michelle equal to his wife. He fell in love with and wed Gwen, not Michelle. If she’s not happy with what she has, she should leave.

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9/19/2023 It has been over a year since I last posted something. I have a story almost ready for Halloween, the first time I've tried to construct a story for that holiday. Just a section of rewrite and a final editing check before it's done. It will be ready in time for the H...

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